短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线(__)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.
Before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldn't find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket，which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.
No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show our concern to others on need，the world would be a better place to live in.
Here are some letters for you and he.
One day, did not feeling well, Mr. Smith went to the hospital1.____________
to have him examined. When he was given the test report,2.____________
he was greatly shocked. “Am I dying?” He immediately3.____________
was felt very ill. Filled with sadness, he went back home,4.____________
taking a lot of pills and even wrote his will. “Maybe5.____________
a doctor made a mistake”, Mr. Smith thought and6.____________
went to the hospital to have more examination. To his7.____________
great joy, the doctor really made a mistake but he didn’t8.____________
have cancer in all! Again, the whole world seemed beautiful.9.____________
Mr. Smith went out for his favourite sport happily rather sadly.10.___________
Yang Liwei was born from an ordinary family in Liaoning1.____________
Province in 1965. He became the pilot in Chinese Air Force2.____________
in 1987, spend 1,350 hours in the air. He has spent 5 years3.____________
training to become a spaceman. He sent into space at 9 a.m on4.____________
October 15th by China’s Shenzhou V spacecraft, that orbited5.____________
the earth 14 times. He landed safe at 6:23 a.m the next day,6.____________
making China the third country successfully sending a person7.____________
into space before the former Soviet Union and the USA.8.____________
Yang Liwei comes back to the earth after a 21-hour trip9.____________
to space. In space Yang recorded to everything he saw and10.___________
showed China’s national flag to the people watching on TV.
I like travel very much. I had been to most1.___________
of the interested places in Britain already and I just2.___________
don’t want other cold English summer. So I’ll go3.___________
abroad for change this year. Where I’d like4.___________
to is France, Spain, or Italy. Though going abroad5.___________
has the trouble of changing money abroad. But6.___________
when I just think of the sun I’d enjoy for, the new7.___________
places I’d see, the people I’d meet, I get excited.8.___________
In fact, which I’d really like to do is to practice my9.___________
French and Spanish. It would do me a lot at work.10.___________
Today is Sunday, The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life.1.___________
At about 9:00a.m, I go to the bookstore with my friends, there2.___________
was a lot of new books, I didn’t know which one to buy, because3.___________
these books were all useful to me. At last, I chose two.4.___________
At 10:00, we went to the cinema, the film calling Titanic was5.___________
very popular. It took us about 3 hours to see. Having seen the6.___________
film, and everyone was deeply moved. Some friends even7.___________
burst out tears. From the story, I understand that love is noble8.___________
and valuable. That’s a really wonderful film, It is very worth9.___________
seeing again.
What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happy!10.____________