短文改错
What I am actually eager to do is being a responsible person. I used to thinking it was so hard to grow up into a responsible member of our society. Besides, it was an accident happening in a snowy morning that changed my attitude . I was on the way to school and was waiting for the green light with my classmate John while a girl was knocked down by passing car. Without hesitation we ran to her and gave her first aid the instant when we saw it . Soon many help was given to him by the people nearby. Because we sent her to the nearest hospital in time, she was able to receive proper treatment . By the time she left the hospital, she has written a letter expressing her gratitude to those giving help. We both felt so proud that from then on we made up our mind to be always kind and responsible men.
短文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第ll处起)不计分。
Swmming is very popular．People like it in summer because water makes people feeling cool.But if you swim in a wrong place，it may not be safely．Last year，a lot of people died when enjoy thrmselves in water，most of them were students．Nowadays，some people are not careful enough
in swimming．They often think they swim too well that nothing will happen on them in water.Don’t forget：better swimmers died in water．They die not because they were not good swimmer，but because they were not careful．So don’t get into the water when you are alone．If you see“No
swimming”,don’t get into water．Unless you remember that，swimming will be safe．
Dear Lihua,
I’m very glad to have received a letter you sent me ______________
two weeks ago. I had been thinking about the question you ______________
asked me. In my opinion, you should come back before______________
you finish your studies abroad. For one reason, which you ______________
are studying is badly needed nowadays in China. That will______________
be pretty easy for you to find a good work. In fact, I know a______________
few big companies in one city is hoping to hire people_____________
like you. For other reason, I think it will be more convenient ______________
for you to look after your parents as they are getting old. _______________
Therefore, I think it’s a good idea for you to return back._______________
Best wishes!
Minghua
英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下便条为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。便条中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。
When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month late. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.
此题要求改正所给文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的橫线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正。此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉，在该行右边的橫线上写出该词，并也用橫线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行的右橫线上写出该词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一橫线，在该行右边橫线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
They day before the speech contest（比赛） English teacher ____________
talked to me . She said that she and my schoolmate all ____________
wished me success , but it didn't matter that I would ____________
win or not . When I was on the stage the next day , I felt so ___________
nervous as I shook like a leaf . There were so many people ___________
present! Suddenly , I caught a sight of my English teacher in ___________
the crowd . She was smiling but nodding at me. I remembered __________
her words and calm down . I did a good job and won the first __________
prize . Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library. ___________
Whenever I see them I will seldom think of my English teacher. __________
When we got up in the morning every day, we start our daily____________
routine: washing our faces, brushing our teeth and maybe take a bath.____________
When you do this, do you ever think that there is enough water or not?____________
One thirds of the 4.4 billion people in the developing world____________
has no way to clean drinking water. Water-related diseases kill____________
10,000 to 20,000 children every day in the developed world. ____________
What comes to our minds when we read these numbers?___________
Do you think we are lucky or not? In a fact, the outlook for the____________
future, even for us, is not very bright.
So let us value our water as much as possibly not only for___________
ourselves, but also to our children.____________