短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写得以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Dear Headmaster,
I am writing to talk about the canteen of our school. There are only a few stand in the canteen, leading to lots of students have to line up for food. It is waste of time, isn’t it? But at times the food is not fresh and does not taste deliciously. So it’s not surprising that some students chose to go to the street to buy junk food which do harm to their health. Would you think about that how to improve it? I would appreciate you if you could take some measures. Hopefully, my opinion can be taken to account.
Jack
Zhang Hua, our monitor, study very well, and he is always ready to help others. We all very like him.One day on his way to home, Zhang Hua saw an accident.A boy fell off his bike and had his leg breaking. With tears in his eyes, he could do nothing but waited for help. In no time Zhang Hua took out from his pockets the handkerchief he newly bought it. He wiped the tears off the boy’s face, and took him to the hospital with care in a hurry.Several weeks later the boy was quite all right. While they met, they shook hands firmly.The boy was thankful to him.Oh, Zhang Hua! You are a good example for us to follow.Keys For Optional Subject II ( School-based Curriculum )May, 30, 2007
Don’t go sightseeing in any place which thedisease has discovered. Stay away from animals such as ducks, hens, cocks or geese, whichare less likely to get affected by the disease.If you want to buy it from the market, doremember to check that they are safe from the disease. What’s worse, make sure that the food such as chicken is well coked on a high temperature. Don’t forget to open the doors and windows regularly so as to keep the air inside fresh and clean. To kept fit,take more exercises and have a good rest every day. Unless proper measures are taken as experts have suggested, bird flu can be prevented successfully.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Friendship is importance. Everyone needs friendship. In all our lives we can’t live without friendship just like we can’t live without air and water. Friendship makes us getting on well with one another to go ahead under different kind of difficulties in front of us. But real friendship is easy to come by, true friendship must be sincerely and be based on understand each other but not on benefits of each other. A good friend can always be a good teacher to us. By his advice we are persuading to go the right way. Therefore more friends we have, the better we can improve ourself.
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Ladies and gentlemen,
May I have your attentions, please? In Saturday, July 27th, there will have a few visits to different places. Everyone was welcome. All the visitors will be divided into four groups. Each group of visitors can visit one of the place – a factory, a farm, a school and a hospital. Please you sign your name at the Service Desk before 9: 00 a.m. and say what place you wish to visit. We’ll set out after the breakfast at 8 and we will return in the afternoon. We will have lunch at place of visit.
We wish you a pleasant journey. That’ s all.
Thank you.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
主意：1. 每处错误及修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Editor,
I am a senior high student. I am writing to share my worries with my classmates.
With the development of IT industry, many of my classmate have 3G mobile phones. It can inform us the latest news, make us relaxing and keep in touch with our friends, but they play computer games, watch movies or chat online after the class, even in class. These has caused them to lose their interested in their lessons. I hoped 3G mobile phones should be banned at school. Do you agree about me?
I am looking forward to your earlier reply.
Yours,
Li Hua