第五部分：写作（共两节，满分40分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：该行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear editor,
In the past my hometown was used to be a beautiful place. 85.______
Thick trees and green grass could be seen in everywhere. In 86.______
order to build house and grow more crops, people cut down 87.______
more and more trees. With time went on, the whole forest was 88.______
almost destroyed. Gradually the green hills have changed into 89.______
wasteland. As a result, sandstorms struck us now and then, from 90.______
which we suffer a lot. However, I do hope all the people should 91.______
realize the terribly result of not caring about our environment. 92.______
What’s more, they should take good care of the forests and plant 93.______
trees instead cutting them down to improve our living conditions.94._____
下 文 共 有 10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删 除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者，从 第11处起不计分。
I’m a senior student and I’m now in the need of your help although I can’t stand the great pressure.Every day I have to have lesson at school for nine hours and take at least three to four hours doing my homework at home. Our teenagers are eager to play and enjoy ourselves, but we hardly have any time to do that we want. Besides, we don’t even have enough sleep. There seem to have three cases about the overload: the pressure of examinations, too many homework and high expectations from the parents. We often warned that if we don’t do our best we won’t have the chance to go university. The pressure often makes me awake at night.
文中共有10处错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删减或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出改加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My friend Li Hua come to visit me on May Day. During the following days I showed he around the city of Hangzhou. We went to the Museum in the morning of May 2, and we learned many about the history of Zhejiang. In the afternoon, we made a tour to the West Lake. It was really great funny! In the evening I took Li Hua to the night zoo .It was too interesting to see animal at night. The next day we went to the book shop to buy books. Though we were very tiring in those two days, but we enjoyed ourselves very much.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11除起）不计分。
Dear friends,
It is real a good chance to have met all of you here．We have spent several weekend in learning in the English Club．Although we had been members for a short period of time, we have made a great progress．That is because we are all very active but the activities are not only enjoyable but also helpful．Beside, the foreign teachers here work hard and try their best to make the activities lively and interested．I am very pleased say that all of us have greatly improved our speaking English so far．I am looking forward to see all of you again in the near future!
假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
My family was very poor when I was child. My parents were workers but couldn’t afford to buy toys
from me. As a result, my dolls looked a lot differently from those bought from toy stores. My dolls were
home-made. The first doll I owned it was made of a glass Coca-Cola bottle. I was such excited to make a doll by
itself. Soon I became a collector of empty Coca-Cola bottles because I see each bottle as a possible baby doll at
that time. People whom worked in the store selling Coca-Cola could see me pick up empty bottles almost every
day. Those home-made toys brought me a lot of happy.
I was walking home from school while suddenly it rained heavy. What should I do? I didn’t have an umbrella and a raincoat with me. I looked around and see some students walking happily under their umbrellas. They must listened to the weather forecast. I began to run and caught in the rain. I kept running until I got to a bookstore which I could wait until the rain stopped and in the same time I could read my favorite books. After about half a hour, the rain stopped and I go home.