第二卷（共35分）
第四部分 写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多—个词：把多余的诃用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Today we went to climb the West Hill．Early in morning 76．__________________
we started out and arrived an hour late．Then we began 77．__________________
to climb．The hill was high and some of us got tired 78．__________________
soon, and all of us were very excited．We cheered 79．__________________
happily when we got the top．We had our lunch there 80．__________________
and had enjoyed ourselves very much．Unfortunately， 81．__________________
when we walked down the hill，We were caught by 82．__________________
a rain．We remained calmly，shared umbrellas and 83．__________________
raincoats and walked carefully．Finally we both reached 84．__________________
the parking lot safely．In spite of the unexpecting rain 85．__________________
and wind，we had a good time．
假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有
10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处
加一个漏字符号(
)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Some peoples hold opinion that wealth can bring happiness to them. It is true that most of them try to acquire wealth by means of honesty labor. They work hardly and overcome many difficulties. After doing this, they feel very happy and pleasing. Even their spend money is a kind of happiness.
But some people believe wealth can’t bring him happiness. For example, when one makes a fortune, the family members will come from different parts of the country and try to share the wealth for him. And afterwards, they will quarrel with one another, trying to share more.
In my opinion, I think there is no doubt whether wealth brings happiness, especially in the modern society. But we should take a proper attitude towards wealth. Remember： money is not anything。
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（第11处起）不计分。
My parents has decided to take me to paying a visit to Britain. I am exciting, hoping to make a good use of this opportunity. Firstly, I will talk to native as much as I can improve my English. Secondly, there are many attractions that interested me a lot, among them is Big Ben. Besides, football, is popular in England, is my favorite sport. I have been dreaming of watching a lively football match there, now the dream will come true. My friend Alice lives in London. I will meet with her. Whatever I do, I am sure I will have a bad time.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In order to raise the awareness of students’ protecting the environment, our school organized activity of visiting a photo exhibition about haze on January, 2015. None of us took part in it.
At the art gallery of our city, we enjoyed a lot of photos, reading captions and analyzed some related data. We were astonishing by the harm caused by haze. Meanwhile, we thought high of some works and admired the photographers’ skills. Additionally, we learned what to deal with haze.
For conclusion, the activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it make us to learn more about haze, it also made us awareness of the urgency of protecting our living environment. We all decided to take action to protect the environment.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两赴，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Opinions are divided about if we should buy products promoted by stars. Some students say that they prefer to buy products promoted by stars because of most of the stars care about the quality of the product they are going to advertise.Besides, buying those products is a way to support the stars they like. However, other think what some stars really care is money but not the quality of the product when they make a advertisement.In addition, the product that a star advertises is not necessary suitable for everyone. To my opinion, we should be cool and sensible while chosen a product. The main aspect we are supposed consider /s not the advertisement or the star and the quality of the product and its real usefulness in our daily life.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，共15分）
下列短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用划线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1、每句不超过两个错误；
2、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
3、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When traveling to Paris on a bus, I became very sick. Fortunately, a well-dressing man on the bus helped me great. He took me off the bus, found out where the doctor’s office and took me there himself. The next day, he came to visit me. Because of I didn’t speak French well, I couldn’t talk with him very much. However, even we couldn’t talk, we could communicate. I communicated myself thanks to his great kindness, and he communicated his concern for my healthy. Through this experience I have learned what communication can take place without much actual language at all.