假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写得以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Dear Mr Anderson,
I’m not sure whether you can remember me,and we met in Bethany last
year．It was at your daughter wedding．You and me had a pleasant talk and I
told you a little about my job as reporter for the New York Times．At that
time I do like to stay in New York,but now I’d like to get a job back in my
town．My problem is that have been away for a longer time that I have not
some job contacts（关系） in Bethany．That’s why I’m writing for you ．I
would appreciate if you could put me in touch with anyone who could help
me and advise me．
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正短文的错误，对标有题号的每一行做出判断，如无错误，在该行右边的横线上打一个勾（∨）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
短文改错
| In a national spelling contest in America, 11-year-old |
76._________ |
| girl was asked to spell a certain word. But with her softly |
77. _________ |
| voice the judges were sure if she spelled the word with letter |
78. _________ |
| A and E . They talked it over and finally decided to simply |
79. _________ |
| ask her what she had said. Immediately the girl knew he had |
80. _________ |
| mis-spelled the word. But instead of lying and told the judges |
81. _________ |
| she had said the correct letter, she told the truth which |
82. _________ |
| she had said the wrong letter, so she had lost the contest. |
83. _________ |
| As the girl walked off the stage, the audience stood |
84. _________ |
| to their foot clapping to applaud her honesty. |
85. _________ |
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
Last Sunday, my father invited his colleagues to our home for a
dinner party, included his boss. However, my three-year-old sister 76.
stared at my father’s boss sitting across from her all time during 77.
the dinner. He can hardly eat because of her stare. So embarrassed 78.
was the boss so that he checked his tie, touched his face 79.
and look at himself in the mirror. Even so, nothing stopped her 80.
staring at him. He tried to pay not attention to my sister, 81.
and finally it was too much for him. He couldn’t help asking 82.
her, “How are you staring at me?” Everybody present had noticed 83.
her behavior and the table went quietly for her response. My 84.
sister replied, “My daddy said you are a big eater and I don’t 85.
want to miss it!”
第Ⅱ卷(共35分)
第四部分：写作(共两节，满分35分)、，，
第一节：短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：
如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)I如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
As we know that, TV plays an important part in our 76
daily life. It’s quicker and more conveniently to get 77
information from TV than from newspapers. Providing 78
us with lively and interesting moving pictures, TV enabled 79
us not only to see what is happening in the world but 80
learn many things, included foreign languages. So it 81
is not reasonable to forbid students to watch TV. And 82
watching TV too long is not good. Sitting in the front of TV 83
all day does harm to our eyes and waste our time for study. 84
So we should take a correct attitude to students watch TV. 85
第二节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
A man went to an insurance office to have his life insured. The manager of the office ask him how old his parents were when they were died. “Mother had a bad heart and passed away at age of 30. Father died of tuberculosis (肺结核) when he was 35.” “I’ m very sorry,” said the manager, “We can’ t insure our life as your parents were not health” Disappointing, the man left the office. He met a clerk who had listened their talk. “You mustn’t be so frank and tell the truth.” said the clerk. “Not office will insure you if you speak like that. Use your imagination a little.” The man went to other office and was shown into the manager’ s room. “Well, young man, how old were your parents when they died?” “Mother was 93, and died while she was play football.”
第II卷（共45分）
第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错：（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词；在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Ms. Clark is an engineer. Her job is design new 76. ______________
computers. She’s interested in the work and work very 77. ______________
hard. Before work she usually hurries home to cook supper. 78. ______________
She’s busy but has a few hobbies. She real enjoys 79. ______________
sports. She plays the tennis twice a week. On Sundays 80. ______________
she usually had a short walk by herself after supper 81. ______________
nearly the park which is not far from her home. She has 82. ______________
not time to do so on weekdays. She usually takes a 83. ______________
bus to work. The boss, in his company she works, says 84. ______________
that she is one of the best worker in his company. 85. ______________