此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。短句中有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误中涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词的下面写出修改的词
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一次
2.只允许修改10处,多者 从第11处起 不计分
Last Saturday, I wanted very much to see a film together with my brother after supper.on my way to the cinema, we happen to meet an American named Peter,who had lost his way,Looked worried.
when he told us that he wasn’t able to find the hotel,we decided take him there.when we went to the hotel,we told of Peter the great changes that had taken place in our country in the past few year,and hen told us a lot of things about the youths in the U.S.A.
Although my brother and I missed a interesting film, we felt very happily.for we ha not only helped Peter out of trouble and also learnt something by him.
My husband 96-year-old grandmother came to live with us for many years of independence. We did all the things we could make her feel comfortable, in our home, including giving her the private telephone line for their bedroom One evening we were having a party while the phone rang. It was a telephone operator, who asked, “Do you have a grandmother on upstairs? “Yes, what was happened?” my husband replied. “Well,” the operator again continued, “She can't remember your phone number, and she like a cup of tea.”
A US-led War against Iraq broke out in March 20, 2003 without the agreement of the UN. They came less than two hours after Bush's deadline for Saddam leave his country has passed. There are about 250,000 US armies around Iraq. There are also armies from another countries, includes Britain and Australia, fighting with the American soldiers. Their force is much more bigger than that of Iraq. But they met strong resistance than they expected. “These things are never easy. There will have some difficult times ahead so the War is going on as its plan,” said British Prime Minister Blair.
There are strange similarities in the life of John F. Kennedy and the life Abraham Lincoln. For example, Kennedy became a president in 1960, while Lincoln elected in 1860.This was exactly one hundred years apart. Then both men were shot after, on a Friday and in the presence of their wife. There is another very strangely similarity. Kennedy's secretary, named Lincoln, told him to go to Dallas. Lincoln's secretary, named Kennedy, told him not to go to the Ford Theatre. But all of them went and both were shot to die.
If there are much more people in the world, there must have more food to feed the people. But food is already a problem in today world. One-third of the world's population is starving, because there is not enough food. Ten thousand people died of hunger every day in some parts of the world. But in others parts of the world, people become ill or die, because they eat too much food, and they are very fat. Some countries have no food, but the others have too much, and they throw them away. How can tomorrow's world feed its people? The world needs produce more food than it does now.
We'll never forget the day which my classmates and I paid a visit to a chemistry factory last week. It was a larger one with nearly 2,000 workers. It looked a garden and we could see colorful flowers, grass and trees anywhere. We also visited some workshops and saw workers worked very hard. We talked with them and learned a lot of. We understood them further. On the way home we felt tiring. We all thought that we had a very good day. We real hoped that we could get more chances of leave the school and learn social experience.