文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(
)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线(_)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In my hometown there used to have a temple with a history of over eight hundreds years. It lies in a valley with green hills around it. It was such beautiful and famous that many tourists came to visit to it every day. They took photo; they wrote down their names on the walls; they brought foods, drinks and leave rubbish everywhere. One day some tourists made a fire to cook food near the temple. Suddenly, strong wind blew. The wooden temple was caught fire. Soon the whole temple was burned out but only a few walls remained. The beautiful temple disappeared.
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I went to see film after supper. On my way to the cinema, I met an old Englishwoman,
she had lost her way. I gave up the chance to see the film, walking towards her and
took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her great change had been taken place in the past few years and she told me something about Britain and her family. Though I missed the film, however I felt very happy, for I not only helped the old lady out from trouble but also practise my spoken English. If I hadn’t worked hard at English, I would have been able to help her
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线/ 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Jim is one of my closely friends. Two months ago，his mother bought a computer
to him as a birthday present. She hoped Jim will study hard with the help of the
computer. To his surprise，Jim just wasted plenty of time play computer games every
day. Now she regrets buying the computer. As matter of fact，a computer can do a lot of
everyday jobs for us. It is wide used in factories，hospitals，banks and so on. Many
computers scientists are now trying to make the computer to “think” like a man. In my
opinion，the key is what we should use it wisely.
下面短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
As the high school student, I like to talk with foreigners to practise my oral English and learn more about other cultures. There were two foreign teachers in our school in this term. They often go to the English corner so that they can have a chance to practise the language. I seize every chance talk with them. However, I sometime find they are not so interested in which I say. And it's hard to me to choose a suitable topic. I would like some advices about how to communicate proper with foreigners and what topics to pick.
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及—个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加—个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不记分。
Dear Katherine,
How exciting I am to hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Fortunately, I won’t be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won’t find difficult to get to the city center. The bus left the airport every 30 minute and will take you right to the International Hotel. My class will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you to a hot-pot restaurant for dinner and we’ll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you on Friday.
Sincerely yours,
Zhang Lin
Did you enjoy yourself yesterday? I suppose you do. But I’d like to tell you what a bad day I had yesterday. Nothing just went wrong. On the morning, my alarm clock didn’t ring, since I woke up an hour late. I was in such a hurry that I burnt my hand when I was cooking the breakfast. Then I ran out of the house to catch the 8:30 buses. This is the bus I usually take. But, you may laugh, I missed it of course. I am very unhappy, and scared as well because teacher hates the students coming late to school. So I ran three mile to school only to discover that nobody was there. The school was quiet but peaceful. Our classroom was locked. I realized that moment: It was Sunday.