假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I like music very much, pop songs particularly. Every evening then I am doing homework and at weekends when I at home, I always play some of my favorite songs on my tape recorder. The familiar patterns of notes attract me into the colourfully world of music. Now and then I stopped to follow the songs. Sometimes, my mother comes in, asked me to fix my attention to my homework. She does not like the pop music. Like most grown-ups, she enjoys folk songs, because the peaceful music reminds her of their beautiful life when she was young. It is a truth which people of different age understand music differently and enjoy different kinds of music.
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短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分, 满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误, 在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误）, 则按下列情况改正:
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉, 在该行右边横线上写出该词, 并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线, 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
I was only about six that he held his hand81. _________________
out to me. I took it in me and we walked. Then82. _________________
I ask him, “Grandpa, how come you have83. _________________
so much lines on your hand?” he laughed and 84. _________________
said, “Well, that’s a big question!” He was 85. _________________
silent for a moment. So he answered slowly:86. _________________
“Each these lines stands for a trouble in my 87. _________________
life.” I looked at his other hands. “But Grandpa, 88. _________________
what do you have more lines on that one?”89. _________________
“Because there are more the honors and joys90. _________________
in my life.”
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第五部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday I am about to leave the Green Lake Park when I met a foreign visitor whose seemed to be lost. I tried to help him but I found we had difficulty in understand each other because of my poor English. Just at that moment, tall young lady came to our help. He spoke very good English. With her help, the foreign visitor finally found the way but I learned some English as well. Before he left, the foreigner thanked to us for our kindness. I was very exciting that day. This experience have made me realize that English is real useful and worth learning. I will work hard at it from now on.
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第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错：（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）：如果有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用横线划掉该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词注意：原行没有错的不要改
Last summer I go to America and studied at a language 76. __________
school. I had many wonderful experience, but I also 77. __________
had a sad one. One day, the school held party, where 78. __________
I invited to talk about Guilin. After that they asked me a lot 79. __________
of things about China. But I couldn’t explain them with English 80. _________
clearly. I felt sadly. I learnt a lesson from this experience. I 81. _________
have already studied English for eight years, but I can’t use it 82. _________
very good. I must work hard to improve my spoken English 83. _________
so that I will not be able to communicate freely with foreigners. 84. _________
I hope I can be a bridge between China and others countries 85. _________
in the future.
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第二节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
Time is valuable but limit. There’s a famous saying, 76．________
“Time is money”, this shows the importance of time. When 77．________
time has gone, it will never return back. 78．________
It is a pity when many people make poor use of time. They 79．________
spend precious time sleeping, drinking and traveling. 80．________
They don’t realize wasting time is equal to waste part of their life. 81．________
They always regret having made a little achievement so far.82．_______
Therefore, we should form the habit of value time. Do not 83．________
put off what can be done today until tomorrow. Laziness 84．________
will not only bring us failure, but also lead us on the road 85．________
of poverty and even death.
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第二节：短文改错（共10小题，每题1.5分，共15分）
此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Ron,
I am very exciting to hear that you are coming to76._________
our school soon. Now let me to introduce our school 77. _________
to you. Our school is a famous school with long history. 78. _________
We have many experienced teacher and excellent equipment.79. _________
There are two teach buildings, one is for seniors and the 80. _________
other is for juniors. There are two lab building and 81. _________
a library. Except Chinese, maths, English, physics and 82. _________
chemistry, we have some electives (选修课). The 83. _________
students can choose that they like to attend. We84. _________
love our school. I am looking forward to meet you soon.85. _________
Yours,
Li Hua