假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写得以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ∧ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2． 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Under the help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult work. Just clicking your mouse to choose the article you like, and the shopping is finished. You needn't step out the room. It seems easy and quick. And there's always a trap online. If you are careless, it will bring you trouble. You may find the color of the article is different from that you want, or the size is either too small nor too big. If you want to be different, you'd better not to buy clothes online. Once you put up the clothes you bought online and go out, you will find many people in the street wearing the same clothes like you.
第Ⅱ卷
第四部分：写作（共两节。满分35分）
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横筑上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Some Americans judge success on the length 76．___________
of his vacations . The man who gets a month’s 77．___________
vacation each year consider himself more successful 78．___________
than the man gets two weeks . Many people want 79．___________
to be teachers because it is teachers who can 80. ___________
get three-month vacation every year . Some college 81．___________
teachers who teach the three classes consider 82．___________
themselves less successful than that who teach 83．___________
only one or two , or none in all . In short , the less 84．___________
work Americans do , the less successful they 85．___________
consider themselves .
四改错
This summer holiday, I get a chance to teach English 76. ___________
beginners. I experienced life as teacher for the first time. 77. ___________
The students were very small, but I was even nervous when 78. ___________
so many kids stared at me. Fortunately, their warmly welcome 79. ___________
encouraged me. I taught them some letters, sang English songs 80. ___________
and played games with them, fill the classroom with laughter. 81. ___________
But little kid like talking with each other in class, so it was 82. ___________
hard to control the class. As a result, I got a sore throat. Thus, 83. ___________
I found that teaching is cool and exciting, especially that 84. ___________
when you help your students to learn anything with joy. 85. ___________
第二卷（共两节，满分45分）
I. 短文改错（共10 小题；每小题 1分，满分10分）
Mr Huang is sixty years old. He has retired. He taught our 76. ____
Chemistry when we were in Senior Grade One. He was old, and 77. ____
he taught very well. He tried his best to make his classes live. Mr 78. ____
Huang usually made good preparation for the lessons and was 79. ____
strict with us too. Each time we made mistakes in our homework. 80.____
he would ask us
to correct them. At time, I was rather poor in 81.__
chemistry. Mr Huang often helps me with my study very 82.____
Patiently. With his help, I made a great progress and caught 83.___
up the class. He was always very kind to every student. As 84.____
an experiencing teacher, he was respected and loved by all 85.___
the students
第二卷（共35分）
第四部分：写作（共两节；满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个（√）；如有错误，则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改！
Yesterday I was invited to join in a 76．______________
old friend’s birthday party . The p
arty was going to 77．______________
begin on 8 o’clock in the evening .I was afraid of 78．______________
being late , so I lent a watch from my neighbor . When 79．______________
I got to there , my friend gave me a warm welcome . 80．______________
He introduced me for some other friends . After we 81．______________
shared the big birthday cake , we started dance and 82．______________
singing . What wonderful time we had ! On my way home 83．______________
I stopped to look at my watch —To my surprise that 84．______________
wasn't around my wrist any longer ! I hurried
back my friend’s house . Luckily I found it there . 85．______________
第Ⅱ卷
Part Three：Writing（two sections；full marks 35）
Section One：Error Correction（10 questions；1 for each，full marks 10）
本题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：
如此行无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）
如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列要求改正：
此行多一词，则把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，且也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词，则在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该词。
此行错一词，则在错词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
第一节：短文改错
We’ll never forget a day when76_______
my classmates and I paid a visit a77_______
chemistry factory. It was a large78_______
one with nearly 20 000 workers. It
looks like a garden and we saw col-79_______
orful flowers grass and trees there.
We also visited some workshop and80_______
found workers working hard. We
talked to them and learned a lot of81_______
We understood them further. On
the way home we felt very tiring, 82_______
but we both thought we had a very83________
good day. We really hoped what we84________
could get more chances of leaving
the school and learn about society.85________