假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处 加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。 修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today is Sunday. The sky is full with sunshine, so is my life. At about 9:00 am, I went to the bookstore with my friends.There was a lot of new books, but I didn't know which one to buy,
because these books were all useful to me. At last, I chose two. At 10:00 am, we went to cinema. The film was called Titanic .It was very popular. It took to us about 3 hours to see it . Having seen the film, everyone was deeply moving。My friends even burst out tears. That's a real wonderful film. It is very worth seeing again. How a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be much happy!
1. 下面短文中共有5处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改5处,多者(从第6处起)不计分
Tomato Apaza is a gentle 46-year-old man, lived in a village near
the most dangerous part of the road. The roads are in bad condition
and accidents are frequently. And thanks to Timoteo, that works as
a human traffic signal, the death toll has falling.
单句改错(共10分,每小题1分)
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下画一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
The film is so interesting that I have seen it many time.
China is much big than Japan, which is the third largest country in the world.
Besides, I have few friends, I don’t know that they don’t like to talk with me.
It is known to everyone that it is famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals.
At once I apologize and controlled myself at my best till the dinner started.
On the night before my first day, I was too excited to go to sleep and as a result, I got up lately in the morning.
Bill was standing by the car, talking to two men which were helping him to repair it.
Thousands of people go to the seaside in every year.
My grandma was the best cook in the world but could make the most delicious dishes.
The boy suggested our go for a walk after dinner. I thought it was a good idea.
短文改错:(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(╲)划掉
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一次。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays, the computer technology develops very fast that the Internet has become more and more popular. Some students regarded it as a great helper. Because there has a lot of information on line, so you can surf the Internet for any information you need in a short time without working hard in the library. This is also very convenient to talk with others by using the Internet. Moreover, other students think that there is some information on line which is not good for students. In addition, spend too much time playing games will not only have a bad effect on their studies but also do harm for health. Therefore, we should make properly use of the Internet. It is of great important to separate good plants from wild weeds.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌系的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线(),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It seems that there are a larger number of beggar in the streets than there used
to be. I don’t know how we should help them or not. Once I give some money to a beggar
who looked poor. However, a few minutes later, I saw him bought some cigarettes. It
really shocked at me. In my opinion, anyone who work hard can make a living. I’m
afraid that giving them money isn’t best way to help them. Maybe the government can
take some action to helping them. Anyway, if they want to live a better living, they should
learn to depend on ourselves.
短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
From the picture, we can see that there are many students are wearing glasses, that is, they are short-sighted. As we all know, which is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight? First, don’t keep your eyes work for a long time. You’d better have rest after you have studied an hour or so. Second, pay much attention to the following. Don’t read under the sun or in a poorly light; don’t read in bed or in a moved bus. Third, do eye exercise every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight. But last you should have enough sleep. Only you obey the rules above can you prevent your eyesight from becoming
short-sighted.