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Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. 1 called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.
It was so a sunny day that I decided to go fishing. I went 1.
out early and sit on the bank of the river. I hoped that I would 2.
have a good harvest. A long time passed. Although I waited 3.
patiently, but there was no luck. When the sun was about to set, 4.
I caught nothing , it made me very disappointed. I walked 5.
home sadly with the fishing pole or the empty basket. I was 6.
sure that my mother would laugh at me. Passed a fish market, 7.
I suddenly had an idea. I bought two big fresh fish and brought 8.
them home. My mother would certainly happy when she saw 9.
the fish and she would encourage me to continue to fishing. 10.
Tim is third-grade pupil. Recently he failed in exams. When he 1.
got his report , he was deep worried. The report should be signed by 2.
his father in order that his father can know his poor work at school. On 3.
the way to home, an idea appeared in his mind. When he got home, his 4
father was reading a newspaper. Tim said jokingly,“Dad ,can you5.
write your name without your eyes shut?” His father repliedwitha smile 6.
“I can try,son,give a pencil or a piece of paper.”As his father shut his eyes,7.
Tim placed a report on the table just beneath the pencil. “okey! His 8.
father wrote his name in “a piece of paper”,The father went onreading 9.
his paper and Tim was satisfied with the report sign by his father. 10.
This year summer vacation was most enjoyable. I spent fifteen days 1.
helping my grandparents doing farm work in the countryside,there I 2.
saw mountains and fields cover with green plants. Sometimes I went 3.
swimming in the river to the west of the village, the water which was quite 4.
clear. I kept a diary every day. Besides do farm work,I helped the children 5.
in the neighborhood on their lessons. All of them showed much interest 6.
in English. They could read and write well,and they could hardly 7.
understand simple English. So every day in the morning Ispenttwo 8.
hours helping them improve their listening and speaking English.They all 9.
made great progresses. Their parents thought highly of me. 10.
we had a P. E. lesson in this afternoon. Our teacher taught us 1.
to practise the long jump. When the bell rings,we gathered 2.
on the playground. After warming-up exercises,the teacher 3.
told us the way of long jump and showed us how to do. Then 4.
we followed the teacher and practiced one or another. Soon 5.
came my turn,but I felt a bit of nervous. Though I failed 6.
the first time,but Ididn't lose my heart. I kept on practising. 7.
At last I was able to jump over more than 3 meters.From this 8.
lesson ,I came to see that one will succee if he has perseverance. 9.
And I decide I will do as many as I can to do every thing in future. 10.
Lily is one of the puipls who is studying in Dongshan 1.
Primary School. One day,in her way to school,Lily found 2.
a wallet lay on the road. She picked it up and found a lot of 3.
money and a calling card in them. She thought the loser must 4.
be worried. Without the wallet,she went to a public telephone 5.
and called on the owner. Then she waited at the bus-stop. The owner 6.
came by taxi in a moment. Lily gave the wallet to her. The owner 7.
was very thankful that she took out a 100-yuan note to rewardLily. 8.
And she refused it and went to school. Seeing this , the ownerraised 9.
her thumb and praised Lily helping her in time again and again . 10.