假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（___），并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Brad,
I am a boy in the first grades of a senior high school. I feel uneasily recently. At home I feel like prisoner. I am not allowed to watch TV or surf the Internet. The only thing I have to do it is studying. Every time I got a low mark, my parents will scold me sharply. There’s a generation gap among my parents and me, but it’s always difficult to communicate. Life are supposed to be colorful and wonderful, isn’t it? How should I devote all my time and energy to the study so as to entering a good university? I am very unhappy and lost. I need your help.
Best wishes,
Yours
Li Hua
此题要求改正所给短文中的九处错误。如无错误，在该行右边横线上画（√），如有错误（每行只有一处错误），则按照下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用（\）划掉，在右边横线上写出该词，并用（\） 划掉；
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在右边横线上写出该加的词；
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在右边横线上写出改正后的词。
We all know that healthy is very important to us. Both
study and work depend by strong bodies. Doing sports
and games help us keep strong and healthy. If we do not
take any exercise, we may feel tired but get sick easily.
There’re many different kinds of sports we can do them,
such as playing ball games, running, walking and swim.
However, now we have too much homework to do in
every day. We hope that we’ll be giving less homework
and have more time take part in sports. We also hope
that our school can hold a sports meeting every term.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Attention, please, everyone. We’ve accepted the
weather forecast on the radio this morning that
there will have a heavy rain tonight. Be sure
to shut the windows and doors until you leave
your classrooms. The sports meet when we planned to
hold it tomorrow will be put off. After it becomes
fine, we’ll make other announcement. We will
have classes on Wednesday as usually. Since it is
colder tomorrow, please dress on more clothes in time.
Those come to school by bike, don’t keep your
umbrellas open while riding.
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符合（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划—横线，并在该下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
短文改错
Dear Elli,
I am a senior student. I like make friends with people and I do my best to get well with everyone. But last week I had found out that one of my friends wrote their diary ,saying that she disliked me she doesn’t want to be my friend any longer, And
now she has started making fun of me because of I’m fat. I’m kind to her but why can’t she be friend to me? As for lose the discouraging weight, should I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other ways? Please give me some advices.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划一个（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误）；则按下列情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Editor,
I’m a senior high school student, named Li Hua. Now many students
have iPods and think it’s a fashion to use it. Using an iPod , we can listen
to music, downloading a lot of learning materials and read them on the
screen. Apparently, it is helpful to our study, specially to our English listening.
Some students, however, take their iPods to the classroom and listen to
music with earphones, which make the teacher and other students greatly
annoyed. What’s worse, some of them even waste the precious time in class
playing video games.
In my opinion, as students, we shall make good use of iPod to
help achieve academic successes. Classroom is a place for students to
study, and therefore concentration awfully needed for us to learn
our lessons. Furthermore, the school should make a rule to guide the
students to use iPods in a proper way.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua