假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两赴，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It was Grandpa’s birthday party. It was not easy to have his children and grandchildren all back home together. so they just busied themselves in playing their cellphones, totally ignored their grandpa, who let in a deep sigh and left the party.
There is no doubt whether cellphones have a negative impact on our lives. Heavy use of cellphones actually widen the distance between teenagers and their elders, leaving the elders more lonely. Worsely still, addiction to cellphones might also lead to teenagers’ poor performance at school, which adds up to elders’ worries.
As far as I was concerned, it’s necessary to limit the time we spend using cellphones. And I attach great importance to communicate with our family members face to face, which helps build a harmony family atmosphere.
第四部分写作（共两节，满分20分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题，满分5分）
| In order to go diving, you need some equipments. First divers carry their backs a metal bottle, which is filled of water. There’s enough air in it to last about 40 minutes. Next, divers carry heavy metal weights in a belt around its bodies. With these heavy weights they would float to the surface. You see, there are a lot of air in their air bottles, and this will bring them up to the surface if they didn’t have any more weights. Mostly divers don’t go very deep. |
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改错
Bob told me that he would like to be lawyer when he was at school. He had worked very hard at his lessons and tried to enter into a famous university, but something unhappily happened to his family, that made it necessary for him work for a living. As a young man, he had been a bus-driver, a dust-man or a salesman. But he spent his spare times studying and finally become a college teacher. “Young people,” he often said, “full of wishes and hopes after they step into society.”
第Ⅱ卷（共35分）
第四部分写作（共两节；满分35分）
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多与的词用（／）划掉，在该行的右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行错一个词：在错词下划一（－），在该行的右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Dear Mr. Brown ,
I am writing to thank you with your kind help.76_______
Before you came to teach us , I had not interest in 77_______
English .My pronunciation was terribly. I could 78_______
Only speak a few words. But one and half year later , 79_______
I now think English fun to learn . I got a lot from your 80_______
encouraging words. I will always remember what you 81_______
said , “ If you try to , you can be No. 1 !” I hope you’ve 82_______
had pleasant journey home and will come to China 83_______
again sometimes in the future. I will write again 84_______
and send you the photos we take together . 85_______
Yours sincerely ,
Li Min
第Ⅱ卷 (共35分)
第四部分写作(共两节。满分35分)
第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear George,
Thank you so much for your photo taken by the 76.________
Kenston Lake. They are very beautiful and highly praised 77. ________
by whoever sees them. I’m going to send one to 78. ________
Mr.Harris to see if any can be choosing for the photo 79. ________
exhibition. I’m going on holiday the next month. I’d 80. ________
like to visit you in Kenston. I had an aunt there, so 81. ________
I can stay with him. Then we can meet and spend a 82. ________
3 day holiday together. I’ll go by train. There’s so many 83. ________
traffic on the roads that driving is no more pleasure. Of 84. ________
course, I’ll take my fishing tools so that we do some fishing. 85. ________
Hope to join you soon.
Yours,
Tom
短文改错
此题要求改正短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每一行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：将多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边的横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），在该行右边的横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错词下划一横线，在该行右边的横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错误的不要改动。
Attention, please, everyone．We′ve accepted the 39．______
weather forecast on the radio this morning that 40．______
there will have a heavy rain tonight．Be sure 41．______
to shut the windows and doors until you leave 42．______
your classrooms．The sports meet when we planned to 43．______
hold it tomorrow will be put off．After it becomes 44．______
fine, we’ll make other announcement．We will 45．______
have classes on Wednesday as usually．Since it is 46．______
colder tomorrow, please dress on more clothes in time． 47．______
Those come to school by bike, don′t keep your 48．______
umbrellas open while riding．