假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Ms Karen, 38 years old, has been helped the old over the past 12 years. She often encourages her daughter—Celest, 10 years old—help the old people as well as. Visiting the seniors who have limited or no family support are what all of them do every weekend. When Celest was the baby, Ms Karen Kong brought her to visit the old so no one looked after her. Whatever, as time went by, it became a meaningful weekly affair and a time to get along for her daughter. She thinks it’s importance to teach children to love the old and hopes the virtue can be passed on.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
假如英语课上老题要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除、或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1、每次错误以及修改均限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者从第十一处起不计分
例如：
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend /\ weekend with you．Luckily I was
the am
completely nee then, so I’ll to say"yes"．I' 11 arrive in Bristol at around 8p．m．in Friday evening
on
I feel very happy to receive your letter and here I 'd like to give you some advices on how to leam English．Above all, don't lose your heart．
Many students find it hard to learnt English, especially to write good English compositions．In my opinion, if you want to improve your writing better, you should leam by heart so many English expressions and patterns as possible．And at the same time try to use it in your compositions．I think just remember grammar rules is no use. Only by reading and writing a lot can you be able to learn English well in effective way. I think what the most important thing is that you should keep writing every day and never give up.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断；如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词，在缺词处加一个漏字符（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Today I attended a meeting holding in our school． 86．_______
At the meeting over forty model students praised． 87．_______
For our joy, Li Ding, monitor of our class, 88．_______
who was among them．We all felt proud of 89．_______
her．Then the headmaster gave them a talk．He 90．_______
wanted us to learn these students and hoped that 91．_______
more and more students will be praised at the 92．_______
next school meeting．I was great encouraged and 93．_______
made up my mind to work harder．Next week 94．_______
there will be a English exam．I’ll try to get good marks． 95．_______
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Bill enjoyed shoot very much, but he was never good at it．One day his friend was named
Jack visited his house and saw a new target Bill had put several days ago in his garden．Jack
went nearer but saw a hole in the middle of the target．When jack asked who had shot at it,
Bill said he had．“How far away are you? Two feet?” But Bill said he was 50 yards away．
Then Bill’s wife explained Jack the hole．He said, “Bill went to a shop and bought a piece of
wood．He put it in the garden and shot at it from 50 yard away, only to shoot a hole．Then he
drew a target round a hole．”
第Ⅱ卷（共35分）
第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语文错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除和修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A concert was given to several famous singers last Saturday.Tickets were very hardly to get. Since I enjoyed attending that concert,I bought one at the hight price. For the first half hour the concert went on smooth.The nice shows of the stars singers were warmly welcomed by the listeners.Many of them couldn't help burst into tears.Before long the microphone went wrong.Some people began to make voice. The members of the theatre tried to keep in order, but failed. They had difficulty in continuing the concert.Thus, a perfectly good concert caused to be no value by some uneducated people.
第Ⅱ卷（共35分）
第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语文错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除和修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My husband 96 - year old grandmother came to live with us for many years of independence. We did all the thing we could to make her feel comfortable in our home,including giving her the private line for her bderoom. One evening we are having a party while the phone rang. It was telephone operator, that asked, "Do you have a grandmother upstairs?" "Yes," my husband repied. "Well," the operator again continued,"She can't remember your phone number,and she like a cup of tea."