第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
A philosophy （哲学）professor walks in to give his class the exam.
Place his chair on his desk, the professor says to the class, 76．
“Use everything you’ve learned in that course to prove this 77．
chair does not exist.” So, pencils are writing but erasers are 78．
erasing. The students had a hard time proving that this chair 79．
doesn’t exist except one student, whom spends thirty seconds 80．
writing his answer, and then turns his paper, which surprises 81．
his classmate. Time goes by, and the day comes when all 82．
the students get their final grades. For everyone’s surprise, the 83．
student who only wrote for thirty seconds gets a highly mark. 84．
His answer to the question is “What a chair?” 85．
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Robert,
Thank for your letter of May 12th . How glad I was when I get it. I’d
be very happy to be your pen friends. Now allow me introduce myself to
you. I’m a boy student aged seventeen, study in Senior Three of Hongqi
High School. I’m a monitor of my class. I am about to take the National
Matriculation Entrance Test after twenty days, that is, between June
7 and 8．You know, I want very much to be a doctor working for poor
peasants that I try to make fully use of every hour and study far into
the night every day.
Best wishes！
Yours truly,
Li Hua
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ）， 并在其下面写上改加的词。
删除：吧多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
There are several ways improve our English writing skills, such as keeping a diary, learning any good writings by heart, doing a lot of reading, etc. As for me, I prefer keeping a diary. Comparing with other forms of writing, keeping a diary is easy and take less time. In addition, they can help us form the habit of thinking in English. If we can keep this practice, and we will gradually learn how to express us in English. What’s more, keeping a diary can be as talking with one of our close friend, sharing our happiness or sadness. In the word, keeping a diary is a good way of improving our written English.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Li Han is a good friend of me. He made a deep impression with me the first time we met, and we became good friend. He is tall and thin. When I first met him, it is rainy and cold. He wore a white Tshirt and blue jeans, with a big smile on his face, that made him look sunny. He doesn't look very handsome, but bright. The glasses on his nose made it look bookish. When we talked I discovered that he was full of humorous. Seen that I hadn't brought a umbrella, he shared his, which made me feel warm. He seemed excellent and kind, but I was determined to learn from him.
英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。共有10处错误，每句最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
3 必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。
Dear Tom,
It is great to receive your email. Now I’d like tell you something which took place in my school yesterday.
In the afternoon we hold a grown –up ceremony for our coming 18 years old birthday. First we made an oath that as grown-up we should have a sense of duty for our social from now on. Then we showed our thanks for to our parents who had gone through hardships to bring us up and teachers who have been educating us patient. And our teachers also gave us cards expressed their good wishes to them. Finally, we put on wonderful performances, singing or dancing. We learned a lot from the activity. I think it’s very important for us. I will never forget the day in my life.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Amy,
I’m writing to ask you for advices, This is a secret, so please not tell anybody else.
My cousin and I used to be good friend , and I used to get along very well with him. We were planning to spend part of our time together, and now I don’t want to inviting him home at all. Recently. I’ve discovered that he’s been started to tell lies, When I told her that it was wrong to tell lies, he just laughed to me, Now should I tell his parent or should I keep quietly?