第 II卷（共35分）
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：
如无错误，在该行右边的横线上画一个勾（√）; 如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉，在该行右边的横线上写出该词，并也用斜线画掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出加的词。
此行错一个词：在错词处划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Many people eat too many and that's not good 76. __________
for their health. In poor country many people 77. __________
can't get enough food and this too damage their 78. __________
healthes. Many students have a poor diet too 79. __________
because they're poor and because they're lazy. 80. __________
I think that that's difficult to plan a good diet 81. __________
these days because it's hard to judge value of 82. __________
frozen and tinned foods(罐头食品). These are 83. __________
wide used because they're so easy to prepare 84. __________
for, but I think we need fresh food, too. 85. __________
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分 ）
此题要求对一段文章改错。先对每一行做出判断是对还是错。如果是对的，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如果有错误（每行不会多于一个错误 ），则按情况改错如下：
此行多一个词，把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词，在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词，在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行
没有错的不要改。
Most Americans would find it hard to think that what life____________
would look like without a car. But, some have realized ___________
the serious question of the pollution caused by the car. ____ ________
The polluted air becomes harmful and dangerous to health. ___________
One way to gett
ing rid of the polluted air is to build a____________
car that doesn’t cause pollution. That is how several of the __________
large car factories have been tried to do. But to build _________
a clean car is more easier said than done. Progress in this_________
field has been slow.
Another way is to take place of the car engine by a ___________
steam one. Inventors are now working on steam cars as well as
electric cars. Many makers believe that it will spend __________
years to develop a practical model that pleased people.
短文改错 (10%)
文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）。并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Dear Sir,
How are you? As a exchange student, I am writing to tell you I would prefer to move into a single room in next term, as I find it inconvenient to share a room with others. My roommate often held parties at night, made much noise. Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that disturbs me a lot. So I hope to draw your attentions to this problem. If you think in my position, I am sure he will agree that the only solution for me is get a room of my own, one not in the same building and as near to the school campus as possible. I would be gratefully if you could do me the favor.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的第一行作出判断：如无错误，在答题卡相应的的位置上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词在答题卡相应的位置上用斜线（\）划掉。
此行缺一个词：在答题卡相应的位置上写出该加的词，
此行错一个词：在答题卡相应的位置上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
It’s a story happened five years ago. Li Hua, who lived in the
city, came to visit her uncle in our village. She and I became
good friend. One day, I went to her uncle’s to do homework
with her. But she wasn’t in. I found beautiful clock on her bed.
I became very curiously and took it to have a look. Since I
have never seen a clock before, I touched it here and there.
But suddenly, I found the clock wasn’t working. I felt worrying
and wanted to run. But I didn’t. Later that day, I told Li Hua
I had broken her clock. She smiled, said her little cousin had
dropped it onto the ground this morning and it had stopped working since then.
短文改错 (共10小题; 每小题1.5分, 满分15分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误. 对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√); 如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉, 在该行右边横线上写出该词, 并也用斜线划掉.
此行缺一个词: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^), 在该行右边横线上写该加的词.
此行错一个词: 在错的词下划一横线, 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词.
注意: 原行没有错的不要改.
Behind my apartment, there is used to be a dirty and ______________
messy corner. Bits of plastic bags hanged on the trees. ______________
Broken bottles were left laying here and there. There was______________
a damaging car in the center. The whole corner gave off an ______________
unpleasant smell. One year ago, we decided to turn it in a ______________
beautiful park. since then, great changes have been taken place______________
in that corner. All the rubbish have been cleared away. Flowers ______________
and young trees have planted all over. Now birds come ______________
here to sing, children come here to play, and adults come here______________
to enjoy our peaceful life. It has taken on a new look.______________
短文改错（共10分）
下面短文中有10
处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am an overweight girl struggle to make my way through high school. I’m always tired and my left knee often hurt when I am walking. I am fighting to be treated the same like others. I have been overweight for many year since I was a primary student and through the time I have been made fun or laughed at. However, I had learned to find ways to make myself happily. I have friends and my family who respect me for who I am and who don’t mind that I look like or my large body. Though I still don’t fit in with everyone and I still get laughed at, but at least I have friends who care about them. Of course, I’m trying to lose weight and become thin.