英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下便条为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。便条中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。
The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at
relaxing myself. I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play
the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I’ll have during the winter holiday!
However, my parents think different. They don’t want me go out. They are afraid I’ll be
knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Besides, they are afraid I will lose
my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, so I will try to
persuade them.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。按下列情况改正：
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A)，写出该加的词。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，写出改正后的词。
注意:每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Bill worked in big office, and he usually went to the barber's during working hours to have his hair cut. This against the rules： office workers had to have his hair cut in their own time. While Bill was at the barber's on one day, the manager of the office entered in to have his own hair cut. Bill saw him and managed to hide his face. But the manager sat besides him, and soon recognized him. "Hello, Bill," said the manager, "I know you are having your haircut. ""Yes, sir, I do, said Bill. "You see, sir, it grows in office time. " "Not all of it，" said the manager at once. "Some grow in your own time. " "Yes, sir, that's quite true," answered Bill polite, "but I'm not having it all cut off. "
请修改下面的短文，短文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处。
Like many other places, our hometown is either facing the problem of pollution. Unfortunately, people there have realized the importance of protection the natural environment. Factories have been taken measures to stop pouring polluted water into the rivers. The citizens not longer put waste, such as rubbish or human waste into the rivers. Every year, a great number trees are planted. As a result, the water in the rivers are becoming cleaner and cleaner. The hills around the city were covered with green trees and the air there is much more fresher than before.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was a child, my mom was pushed me to study hard, hope I could get a chance to go to college. I experience pressure for the first time. I did that my mom expected because I didn’t want to let her off. I was born to a poor peasant family, but I really knew life was not easy. All the things my mother did was the result of her hope that I could lead better life in the future. As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” I was finally able to meet my mother expectations and have a chance to go to college. Thanks to my mother’s push and the pressure, I made it. Now, I no longer think pressure is a good thing.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处。
Yesterday my family went to Nanchang because of my grandmother had a birthday.This year he is seventy years old.
In the morning we went there by car and then we went to the photo studio. There we all put down the clothes like the Tang Dynasty’s and take a family picture.
At noon, we entered a restaurant, and we each ordered the long life noodles and another foods that must be prepare. Then I began to congratulate my grandmother on her birthday. I wished my grandmother good healthy and long life. After our lunch, we came back.
How a wonderful day we had!
请修改下面的短文。短文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Like many other places, our hometown is either facing the problem of pollution. Unfortunately, people there have realized the importance of protection the natural environment. Factories have been taken measures to stop pouring polluted
water into the rivers. The citizens no longer put waste, such as rubbish or human waste into the rivers. Every year,a great number trees are planted. As a result,
the water in the rivers are becoming cleaner and cleaner.The hills around the city were covered with green trees and the air there is much more fresher than before.